Wednesday, May 14, 2008

Lucky Dog


a happy blur song, a maxfield parrish sky, a convertible, soft marin air, 70mph on the slalom, feeling like christie brinkley in that red corvette...

makes me glad i didn't give up the fight.

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

This post, with different line breaks, is a beautiful, confusing poem.

lou jones said...
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lou jones said...

i just now got your name "don't even know it." maybe that's why i used to be a poet, and no one else knew it.

Anonymous said...

Lucky Dog

a happy blur
song, a maxfield
parrish sky
a convertible, soft
marin air 70mph
on the slalom, feeling
like christie brinkley
in that red corvette.

makes me glad i didn't give up the fight.